I wasn't sure what to do with one of my characters who didn't add much to the story. I realize now that killing him offstage gives his wife motivation to move to America. Problem solved. Thank you!
So interesting. Love the point about the second act/midpoint, false defeat or false victory, reversal. Also appreciated her point about getting the the character's home life right, and the balance with her being out in the field. Thank you!
I wasn't sure what to do with one of my characters who didn't add much to the story. I realize now that killing him offstage gives his wife motivation to move to America. Problem solved. Thank you!
Nice!
So interesting. Love the point about the second act/midpoint, false defeat or false victory, reversal. Also appreciated her point about getting the the character's home life right, and the balance with her being out in the field. Thank you!
Yes, lots of things to learn from. And a beautiful page-turner too! Thank you, Pem.