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E. Ce Miller's avatar

I absolutely love this first sentence and the story of how it led to the entire novel.

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Claude's avatar

I love Benjamin Perci's advice of changing one thing in speculative fiction.

The other thing I admire is the originality of the immediate idea. Whatever crime one commits, this person has one more shadow. The concept is so unusual. But how can a new baby have a shadow other than living in a corrupted world?

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Michelle Hoover's avatar

Yes, it's a wonderful premise to follow.

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